Sdajii
Sdaji
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Haikus are stupid
Commonly they make no sense
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Commonly they make no sense
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ASF has a poetry thread? Well anyway, Anastasia that's something from an 11 yro. Your niece has talent, encourage her.Thought I would share with you a poem my little 11 year old niece...
Storms
Emotional storms
Churning
Erupting
Confusing
Your stomach lurches
Your head spins
Starting to sweat
You faint.
Sandstorms
Twisting
Flicking and flinging
Spiralling into the sun
Breaking the forever silence
That looms over the unbroken golden landscape
Slowing down
All that is left in the sand once again.
Thunderstorms
Rain crashes
On my window
Thunder roars
Rumbles across the sea of clouds
Blanketing the earth in its mist
Lightning flashes
Lighting the darkness of the endless night.
Sometimes, in some post or opinion blog, some of us may come across as a "Crabby old Man;" or Woman, for that matter; or even a "Crabby old Tomcat" like me.
For all those occasions, here is a fitting poem that an old mate sent me today. Please also read the story surrounding it: even though I can't vouch for its veracity, it does add to the poem's impact.
The F Word ...
ASF people keep surprising me. Touching and lovely, joules.you know, sometimes, just sometimes
that thing
out the corner of the eye
walking past the kitchen window
there....again....in the periphery
a blue-on-blue purple bloom
a wash, like a handful of flour hitting the bench-top
that whisper
never paid attention to before
like odd socks in the drawer, you say
serenading the blackness with a quiet inside, you say
and that's true, we say
eventide arrives slowly
evenfall ends quickly
even now, in the silhouette of laughter, you'll smile.......
(c) joules 11/08/12
for noirua
you know, sometimes, just sometimes
that thing
out the corner of the eye
walking past the kitchen window
there....again....in the periphery
a blue-on-blue purple bloom
a wash, like a handful of flour hitting the bench-top
that whisper
never paid attention to before
like odd socks in the drawer, you say
serenading the blackness with a quiet inside, you say
and that's true, we say
eventide arrives slowly
evenfall ends quickly
even now, in the silhouette of laughter, you'll smile.......
(c) joules 11/08/12
for noirua
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