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ASF Poetry Thread

My Love Is Like A Red Red Rose - Izzy
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=52TOtrwBErU&mode=related&search=
http://www.robertburns.org/works/444.shtml
A Red Red Rose ,, by Robbie Burns

O my Luve's like a red, red rose,
That's newly sprung in June:
O my Luve's like the melodie,
That's sweetly play'd in tune.

As fair art thou, my bonie lass,
So deep in luve am I;
And I will luve thee still, my dear,
Till a' the seas gang dry.

Till a' the seas gang dry, my dear,
And the rocks melt wi' the sun;
And I will luve thee still, my dear,
While the sands o' life shall run.

And fare-thee-weel, my only Luve!
And fare-thee-weel, a while!
And I will come again, my Luve,
Tho' 'twere ten thousand mile!
 


2020

Thank you for a beautiful poem yet again

NG
 


My God!!! The words....the melody.....the video............THERE HAS TO BE A GOD!!!!
 
pleased you enjoyed em, ng
Robbie Burns was great - and his birthday (25 Jan) has been responsible for many a Scottish hangover
Probably why the Scots often seem ambivalent about Australia day lol.

one of the kids heard a quote this morning about "enjoy the pressure, you need it to make diamonds" so I took the concept and ran with it. As usual, totally amateur, but you get the idea.
 
PS THIS is the one I like - as we've both already commented on
the mans the gold for all that
.......
for all that and all that ,
the tinsel show and all that,
the honest man though ever to poor,
is king of men for all that
......
for all that and all that
his riband star and all that
the man of independent mind
he looks and laughs at all that

all the words already posted on :-
https://www.aussiestockforums.com/forums/showthread.php?p=160213&highlight=man's#post160213
 
Apathetic Betrayal.
by me.

I’d rather muse on the wonders of life
While holding the hand of one’s beautiful wife
I prefer to be inspired by a neighbour’s wisdom
A stranger’s warm heart and their altruism

But at six every evening or in the daily review
It’s all turning pear-shaped and a deep shade of blue
Our ‘National Interest’ they solemnly decree
Those with the most powerful artillery

‘Where is the love?’ the ’Peas do enquire
Bought in a fire sale, to some bargain buyer
Paid for in ways even wheat farmers resent
At the request of the bloke with the Texan accent

Will our kids safely walk a non-NATO street?
Reflect without fear in the Gallipoli heat?
Will they work Christmas Day for ten bucks an hour?
And wonder what happened to the ozone layer

Share price lords over system repair
Lanes closed quicker than that hospital there
Privatisation, rationalisation
There’s hardly a damn phone box left in the nation

My greatest fear is not terrorism
Or sedition that lands me seven years in prison
It’s the shame I will face, when my kids one day say,
‘Why didn’t you stop them. Why is it this way’
 
PUNTING ON DE-NILE

Early or late, comes the hand of Fate, toppling years in rank and file,
Fate sank the punts of the Pharoahs-of-late, those who punted upon deNile,
Many race past "go", in their quest for dough, but there's some belong "in Jail",
"Monopoly-ising" the world scene so - A Pathetic bloody tale.
......
Fate watches our bombs and our bulding-of-forts, as we hope the drawbridge holds
Fate watches as delicate peace aborts, and undelicate war unfolds
As we tell the kids, between yawns and rorts, "now we've messed up - YOU mustn't fail!" - ....
please ignore (kids) our mass destructive thoughts - and our Apathetic betrayal.

(PS needless to say, Arminius, I loved that poem of yours )
 
tell you what 2020, that is a beauty.
it moved me.
i think we are reading off the same sheet of music.
 
A CHECKLIST FOR A NOTE TO A FREIEND

how long to send someone an email (or poem)?
lets say it’s a line a minute,
unless its a technical tirade or tome
there’s a hundred ways to skin it,
a word to a friend across the foam ?
that the world’s still here and you’re in it ?
can you answer the charge that you didn’t write home
cos your quill and your heart weren’ tin it ?

were your travels of gold or silver or chrome ?
when trouble came by, did you grin it ?
did you meet some Jack or Jill or Jerome ?
did you cry over some or thick skin it ?
did you meet some concept in Paris or Rome ?
was its soul without or within it ?
is the world pure or just polystyrene foam ?
do they doctor that world and spin it ?

did you get some insult from peasant or throne ?
did you fight back or take on the chin it ?
did you moralise long over lover or loan ?
(did you knock back a beer and just sin it) ?
did you lose all your fun so you just couldn’t phone ?
forget to write numbers and pin it ?
did you wake up with headaches and memories unknown ?
did you stop at first draft and just bin it.?

Is your friend that you’re writing a friend outgrown ?
do the two of you no more “Huck Finn” it ?
do you simply repeat some old love always shown ?
does it sound like you violin it ?
did you fear some glass “writing skill”’s only half blown?
ahh to hell – let’s firing pin it!
well - the first thing to writing that note to that gnome
is to sit for a bit – and begin it .

PS Here's another in the same vein -
(and hopefully without being too vain)
https://www.aussiestockforums.com/forums/showthread.php?p=86968&highlight=indies#post86968
 
as of last week i'm a dad again.

Aura

What price a smile
On the face of a baby
In the world a short while
Settled at home…maybe

They don’t know any real funny folk
nor familiar with colours like red, or yellow
They’ve not been a party to fine tales or good jokes
Or cringed at Howard, Abbott or Costello

When their day is divided into eating and sleeping
And the parents do ponder their parental failings
And bubs only concern is the dinner date it’s keeping
The rest of the time is an incessant wailing

The price, the price, is always around us
This smile is a potion infusing a full dose
For our love wells inside and flows out to surround us
It may be coincidence but they smile when they’re close.
 
i havent seen that clip for ages.
reminds me of the time some mates and i went to Victoria.
 
FATHERS AND SHOES

I remember my Dad teaching threading of laces, and tying the damned things in bows,
And the first and foremost of fatherly graces, where kindness and caring flows,
and patience with things that a child will recall, for longer than anyone knows,
- "Remember that moment" (I say to myself) "when in time my own child grows".

I remember my Dad resoling HIS shoes, so cracked and so sadly worn,
When his own soul was fading - about to lose - as the links to his life became torn
And he joked about hiding some shoemaker's elves and his "new" pair of shoes so "reborn"
Confiding to Mum that you don't buy new shoes, when your next life's about to dawn.

These days I get up, and I put on my boots, steel capped and elastic sided,
Not strictly the tricks from my infant roots, while my Father smiled and confided,
Yet I smile for a sec, feel my old Man's touch, and I grin at the future decided,
That I owe my old Man, more than so much, that evolved from the skills he provided. ......

And I thank him for guidance and patience and such, and those footprints o'er which he presided.

Based on the same emotions as the final line of this one ... :-
https://www.aussiestockforums.com/forums/showthread.php?p=83551&highlight=mustard#post83551
 
on the Ab question..

 
further to previous Kipling posted here
https://www.aussiestockforums.com/forums/showthread.php?p=85547&highlight=kipling#post85547 posts #76 and #77

thought I'd slip in Kipling's Gunga Din

"knock knock : who's there
Gunga : gunga who
- gunga DIN!!!"
http://famouspoetsandpoems.com/poets.html
 
I repost that epitath that Kipling wrote for someone
A SON
My son was killed while laughing at some jest. I would I knew
What it was, and it might serve me in a time when jests are few.
 

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Miss Hilton went to Jail,
But a few days later,
Turned very pail,
They said it was just skin infections,
But maybe it was her missed injections!!
 
Further to the Ab question, #375 below :-

 
The Words of Patrick Pearse
The History of Patrick Pearse, One of Irelands Greatest And Most Influential Political Figures and Leaders. A Poet, A Master of the Gaelic Language, And a Nationalist. Pearse was it all. And Died for his Land

 
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