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ASF Poetry Thread

COLUMBUS AND THE APOCALYPTIC ECLIPSE OF THE AZTECS
REPRISE / ENCORE - THE MORAL TO THE STORY

PS This lunar story is an interesting yarn. Let's assume it's true
29 th Feb , 1504 . mmm
well at least they didn't pick 29th Feb 1505
 

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THE TIMING OF LIFE’S CONTINUUM

when a couple plant a garden , when they plan a family tree
there are parts A, B, and hardener, and parts of “you” and “me”
but when single girls on one night stands are left with one night “seed”
is that one night man entitled to have equal say decreed?
-( you don’t have to be guilt ridden or to breed.)

whether half reluctant partner, or praps keen as mustard Ken
he must see her as head gardener, and to her wishes bend
and no way does he have equal say in where the story ends
she must make her own decision – (he must try to make amends)
(a kiss perhaps – unless that kiss offends.)

whether missionary or moral fink, or keen as mustard Ken
he must understand his time to think responsibly was “then”
she can choose the option “later”, praps a few years down the track
she can reason “life’s continuum”, and pressure off her back.
-( she has vines of eggs - and timing's out of whack. )

we must ALL bow to her wishes, SHE’s the one who has the choice
you can back off popes and bishops, you can terminate your voice
don’t dictate a mother’s sentence, she is competent to sign
whether SHE’ll accept this sentence of a child in eight month’s time
-( and your one eye doesn’t mean that eye’s “sublime”.)

stop pretending, men , we’re shepherds, while they’re sheepish ewes and cows,
for each vote that any man has, let these sows have twenty thousand
and stop changing spots like leopards, make a list of all YOUR sins
and then make a list for someone else, and throw it in the bin!

who are men? the bludy Taliban? where we make all the rules?
first we salivate for sex, and then we treat the girls like fools?
next we’ll circumcise young women so they won’t grow up as “wh-ore"!
God forbid that they’d be “just themselves” – as God designed them for.

so - does life start at conception or does life begin at birth?
heck they can’t decide twixt Adam, or some mud, primeval earth!!
and to listen to the ignorant who lecture womankind
when it’s all a flaming figment of their celibating mind.

like a double sided placard both pro life and then pro war
or the double standard hypocrites (the priests and many more)
............
sure the Hippocratic oath dictates there should be some uneasiness !!
but it’s JUST about the medical !! – and it’s secret women’s business!
 

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Heres a wee poem ( I think) one of a few that I jotted awhile back.....


Universal Smile


Coming of Life sanctioned by the universe
Abiding escalated thoughts meaningful success
Failures meander sentimental uselessness
Impartial differences reveals us less
Thus another day has come and gone
Deeming sky having the limits and not alone
Orientation in life we’ve only just begun
Every follicle of smile to you I have become
 
beauty natashia
this one so much prep school by comparison
I wrote it to a girl I met once (100 years ago lol)

YOUR SMILE

first the eyes give a flash then the cheeks start to grin
and the forests and sky and the air all join in
and those features that know only sunshine and spring
the dimples that laugh and the lips how they sing
you can tell that a frown simply wouldnt be right
on those features of yours - such a beautiful sight!

:1 cent (compared to yours) - thanks
 
Coming of Life sanctioned by the universe
Abiding escalated thoughts
And I have felt a presence that disturbs me with the joy of elevated thought - Wordworth's Tintern Abbey
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Tintern_Abbey_(poem)

It's a long one, - only if you've got absolutely nothing to do ...
But early in life I decided that this bloke made more sense than the Church (and I still think so )
http://www.online-literature.com/wordsworth/518/
excerpts only follow, sheesh

purpose in life?
to have a memory like that?
"a mansion for all lovely forms" lol

then again , as Lewis Carroll said,
" it's a pretty poor sort of memory that only works backwards"

Maybe life is about somehow having those attitudes in the present as well - if you get my ghist.
 

Aww Thank you (have they got a blushing smiley?lol)...There is more I wrote about Universe- Mind -Future -Soul-Eyes etc.. and I cannot find it...was done early hours in the mornings...I could not write it again as it was just once in a lifetime occurrence ..(you know what I mean) Will try and look for it....
Your writting started me lol
 
https://www.aussiestockforums.com/forums/showthread.php?p=86879&highlight=thiang#post86879

the following poem is intended to be read either before or after the youtube
- either way - they are inseparably linked

as are carers and their charges - (bless you, you great people)

Something Wonderful
Something Wonderful (King and I)
05 Something Wonderful (Carly Simon Live 1990)
 
I've struggled hard at poet-ry
often from a branch of a tree,
a big strong wind came up fast
and now I've breathed my very last.

Fell out of a tree, by noirua
 
and now I've breathed my very last.
Fell out of a tree, by noirua
noi, can we assume there is "another side"? - and they have commputer terminals - lol

must be just a matter of time before someone claims to have received a message on their computer screen from a dearly departed .
 
concluding verse of Kipling's IF :-

"If you can fill the unforgiving minute,
with 60 second's worth of distance run,
Yours is the Earth and everything that's in it
and - which is more - you'll be a man, my son. "


PS I don't have too much trouble with the rest of his poem - except no longer do I
"make one heap of all my winnings
And risk it on one turn of pitch-and-toss,"
........... because I've learn that
it's too easy to "lose, and start again at your beginnings"
........
and too difficult to "never breathe a word about your loss"
 
noi, can we assume there is "another side"? - and they have commputer terminals - lol

must be just a matter of time before someone claims to have received a message on their computer screen from a dearly departed .

Hi 2020, Whether there is another side or not, there's nothing we can do about our present existance or any next existance, that's set already. I prefer not to think or give advice on such matters as the last person who did, to me that is, slipped on wet grass when out running, hit his head and as they say in East London, where I stayed 20 years ago, he wound up "Brown Bread".

Of course they've got computers on the other side and all you have to do to make contact is...
 

:iagree:



Clipped Wings

The world revolves or lay silent while
Sweeping strides our destined style
Creator stills us by to see another display of man made sights
Yet blinded by the very stretch of futile imagination heights
Clarity in unkind gesture rotating in ones brazened mind.
Assurance a distant as a thwart bird flying high
Wooing moments of beauty flee to rise
Clipped wings unearth in rustic clouded skies
Spreading freedom horizons lies
Stationed minds beneath us cries
Keeping awe in wonderless pry
Fast it will be, slow it will move
Reminiscing stars shunt disapprove
Sway the world deepens a bright
Revolving around light by night
Perhaps ones abreast desires no will
Vividly escaping the living tranquil
:bricks1:

Thats it from me ...Though I will catch up and read
 
ARE HUMANS BEASTS ? - (any offence to the other beasts, although probable , is unintended)

I take it that we all agree, all animals have traits
but just to various degrees – which ? - varsity or fate?
and bully bear – or bully person – more depends on weight
than which is “beast” or “worst”, or praps, which one is Satan’s mate.

when porpoises ride waves beside, a human on his board
what purpose could a human find, to separate them Lord?
both out there living, playing, in the gold god-given sun
while the pedants at home are praying (or are hunting whales with gun)

ask people who have lived with apes, and chimps, and "kings of beasts"
which laws of jungle matter most, and which ones matter least
man, self-styled "Lord of all things" – surely gets the dunce's cap
and God must rue he made man king – and give the rest a rap.

you search the traits of this small world, the “traitors” carved in granite
you’ll see how much God screwed up / erred - when he chose the world to "man-it"
you watch "the Planet of the Apes", which God has “boy-and-girled”
...
which other creature first pack rapes - and then PACK RAPES THE WORLD. ?
 
one more run, and one more verse, one more definition "worse!!"
one more run, with dog in tow, one more mental note "oh no"
one more neighbour scratching head, "why's that man so damned gesticular?
as he stumbled up the street - mumbling ? nothings in particular ?!" .

ah a quick check that I guessed the right meaning for 'gesticular' - hard to think straight and run/walk straight at the same time

- give my left hand to be ampidexterous

gesticulate :- verb - to wave one's hands and arms about when speaking

 
REALITY, MY WINE CELLAR, AND A CLEAR CONSCIENCE

I’m thinking that reality’s a sorta phantom cause
I’m thinking in totality mine differs heaps from yours
I’m thinking it’s a myth and all !!- keep prodding life’s pizzazz !!
its attitude!! - red methanol can taste like ....? rare shiraz!!

directors take a bottle home – costs hundred dollar bills
a rare cab-sav, a taste of Rome, so what if half it spills
I buy a cask of cat’s piss, and I mix in H2O
pretend the cat’s were royal at least, ......and my conscience lets it glow. :alcohol:
 
THE AGM OF THE ALICE SPRINGS SHARE TRADING CLUB

if they only knew, its that dart that I threw, and the damned thing landed on gold,
that I picked that "sweet spot" in the business review, that "bulls eye” to blue chips untold !
had a purple patch there, when I rose to a dare, but it bounced like a roo in a stew
twas the blackest I’ve been, but thank heavens I’m green, and beginner’s luck turned the sky blue.

now I’m much better read, and I study in bed, and the market prevents me from sleep
and I watch zinc and lead, and I count shares instead, where a few months ago it was sheep :sheep:
with a volatile Dow, you just gotta know how, to avoid swapping humpy for shed
the trick is I think – to end up in the pink – instead of the bright bludy red!

as my abo(riginal) friend brags its like red and black flags, and you walk that fine line in between
and let sheep that you count jump a bludy great mountain of money all bright bludy green
stay out of the red, that's it ! enough said!, - ( I hit paydirt, just don’t try to find me )
now it's back to tracking shares, and I’m climbing these stairs!! – and my blacktracking days are behind me!
 

noi, Lol - who's to say you or I aren't from the other side ?

naaa - although I prefer "brown bread" to white, it's not worth dying for
- and for now, I'm off to work or I'm "toast". adios amigos
 
RIP JFK

when presidential cavalcades are being planned these days
in light of history’s sadly taken tolls
they obviously miss those spots where snipers maybe lay
and also (you would guess) those grassy knolls ?
 
THE AGM OF THE WEWAK SHARE TRADING CLUB

me listen long youpela
and me walkim long stock market
and me tok tok pella seller
he say piss off , me say park it.

then me buyim plenty lik lik shares
next day they go likeim rocket
ABC and XYZ - who cares
me buyim pants with bigpela pocket

me findim kava recipe
now me getim big pella gut
me fillim fridge with beer, SP,
and me bar with betel nut.

me haus he lookim same same opera house
me like like what I see
me lik lik high on copra juice
me tok tok my marie

these days me no need go long work
my mari , me, we kiss
and me tink tink “gee – dispela goodpela lurk!”
gee – mepela could get used to this !”
 
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