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ASF Poetry Thread

sorry folks this is a long one - Just shows how versatile was Australia's first poet. " Printed in 1864...Gordon met friends in the Mt Gambier Hotel, and during the evening his attentoin was drawn to a set of 6 plates illustrative of the old Border ballad "The Downie Dens o' Yarrow". Gordon was much pleased with the plates and intimated to one of the company his intention of using them as the subjecvt of some verses. A day or two later he showed the poem to the gentleman he had spoken to .. printed etc...
http://www.rangerjohn.com/thefeud.html
 
http://poetry.tetto.org/read/27841/
trading rookie, nothing to do with the Cross, but a poem about King St nonetheless - a busker with a hangover who loves his guitar - different, nice imagery.

 
THE DEEP SEA COD AND THE FISHERMAN'S SON

It has always amazed the deepsea cod,
As he swims through the wrecks, and the seaweed and sod,
Why these tallships, once proud, till some “Wrath of God”
Delivered them here - and from whence?
Whence their skeletoned crew all strewn about?
Whence the whalers still screaming their final half-shout?
Whence the Titanic patrons who couldn’t get out
Now in “Davey Jones’ Locker” immense ?

Whence the engine room comrades who stand and stare?
Whence the captain about to launch one final flare?
Whence the battleship lad in his ack-ack chair?
Who all died with adrenalin blush;
But the colours down here all merge as one,
And their pasts are all riddles now known to none,
Just a ghostly and fathomless absence of sun,
And the sound is nothing but “hush”.-
And a memory of water’s rush.

………………………………………………….

And the terror for bathers who lay on that beach
Neath a tropical sun like a heavenly peach -
Why that day Davey Jones lurched out to reach
And took em all back to “his deep”.
Whence the freakish gargantuan wall of wet
That has left survivors to fear and fret,
Who in time I suppose will forgive and forget
But - Davey – please stay asleep!! .

Now the deepsea cod’s even more confused
And no less are we who are left to choose
Which mood of a dozen blacks or blues
Would best depict our thoughts;
Whence the bus and the house and the baby’s coat
Whence the thousands of souls who forgot how to float
Whence the church’s old bible a few still quote
In some distant vanquished ports.
Whence the boy in the boogieboard shorts.

Whence the fisherman’s son, and the fisherman’s wife
Who all drowned on that day – in that swirling strife
No gail, no tempest, no red sky to warn
Yet the fisherman lives – though his life is torn
And he goes to the beach to mourn.:
 
A thought for those who died on the weekend , including the little girl found today

Shakespeare, The Tempest:- "We are such stuff as dreams are made of,
And our little life is rounded with a sleep"
 

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The Early Morning

The moon on the one hand, the dawn on the other:
The moon is my sister, the dawn is my brother.
The moon on my left hand and the dawn on my right.
My brother, good morning: my sister, good night.

Hilaire Belloc(1870-1953)
 
trading rookie, nothing to do with the Cross, but a poem about King St nonetheless - a busker with a hangover who loves his guitar - different, nice imagery

It's not the one, infact I'm not sure now if it was called King Street, or it mentioned King Street in it. But I do recall pawn shops, alcho's and the low-life element of the street. Think it was written around the time of the depression.
 
Introduction to Poetry

Billy Collins

I ask them to take a poem
and hold it up to the light
like a color slide

or press an ear against its hive.

I say drop a mouse into a poem
and watch him probe his way out,

or walk inside the poem's room
and feel the walls for a light switch.

I want them to waterski
across the surface of a poem
waving at the author's name on the shore.

But all they want to do
is tie the poem to a chair with rope
and torture a confession out of it.

They begin beating it with a hose
to find out what it really means.



from The Apple that Astonished Paris, 1996
University of Arkansas Press, Fayetteville, Ark., USA
 
btw, here's a poem in it's early stages of drafting - Anyone who has ever written a poem / song / letter / report /advertising idea etc etc can relate to this one lol
 

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Drill, This one has something in common with "Forgefulness" I guess - (more about being pensive) - but much better , it rhymes , lol - and being a patriot, I prefer an Aussie , none better than Gordon IMO with these "beautiful musical melancholy lines". - tell us what you think (if you have time).
PS if you go to that website , don;t bother clicking on any of the "sound files" - just some stupid tune / ditty.
http://www.rangerjohn.com/twoyears.html
Something in common with his lines
"Life is mostly froth and bubble, two things stand like stone , kindness in another's trouble, courage in your own".
 

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Here I am at home, poorly,
Dreadfull cold, cough, cough,
splutter, splutter, at deaths door,
back to bed, rough, rough.

Throat is sore, about to snore,
Chest is tight, can't breath,
Very hot, temperature soared,
rather sick, about to heave.

My head is now hurting,
surely it's not curtains,
sick as a parrot,
I think I've had it.
 
My head is now hurting,
surely it's not curtains,
sick as a parrot,
I think I've had it.
lol - good one noi,
as they say , if it wasn't for venetian blinds, it would be curtains for all of us

PS similar "rhytm" to Gordon.
by the way , don't you just love those lines back there, example...

"And the sunny skies and the leaden,
And the faces that pale or redden,
And the smiles that lovers are wed in
Who are born and buried in tears."

man was a genius. (used to spend all his time memorising ancient classical latin / greek text - could quote em cover to cover etc)

romantic - probably that pensiveness went back to this ...(?)
 
Quare Fatigasti: Found it quite interesting, especially with your not recommended music. Something about that music that goes back to the 16th century or earlier - King Henry V111 and all that.
 
Something about that music that goes back to the 16th century or earlier - King Henry V111 and all that.
Ever wonder what Henry VIII would have thought of the beatles ? lol - or amplified quadraphonic sound that could (as an extreme) break crystal glasses

much like this I reckon
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OrNsjuPcqnQ Oliver Cochlear Implant Activation 12/2006

one small sound for mum, one giant symphony for that little kid

noi, this one probably belongs on your "videos that send a message" thread , but I'll post it here now that I'm on a roll a short movie, and brings a tear to your eye - poetic? - you be the judge , lol.

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gEC-SJbE83E&mode=related&search= first day

further reading / watching :-
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YaPYQQtj1jM what it's like before the implant
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=SmNpP2fr57A the science
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iW5xNGB_jZM&mode=related&search= Surgery Before 1st Birthday Best for Deaf Kids
 

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Wayne, Since you're going to the Cotswalds, here's a poem to help you settle in
By FLOOD AND FIELD (by Adam LindsayGordon)

I remember the lowering wintry morn,
And the mist of the Cotswold hills
Where I once heard the blast of the huntsman’s horn
Not far from the seven rills. etc etc

You'll see his riding friend goes on to participate in the Charge of the Light Brigade, whereas he himself only has a heavy fall in the Hunt. Moral ofthe story , lol - take it easy over there, lol - who cares if the fox gets away anyway (as long as you don't bring itback to Aus)

PS There's actually a second poem appended - worth a read as well
THE VINE TREE vs THE SADDLE TREE....

I remember some words my father said
when I was an urchin vain:-
God rest his soul, in his narrow bed
these ten long years he hath lain
When I think one drop of the blood he bore
this faint heart surely must hold
It may be my fancy and nothing more
But the faint heart seemeth bold.

He said that as from the blood of the grape,
or from juice distilled from the grain,
False vigour soon to evaporate,
is leant to nerve and brain,
So the coward will dare on the gallant horse ,
what he never would dare alone,
Because he exults in a borrowed force,
and a hardihood not his own.

And so it may be , yet the difference lies
Twixt the vine and the saddle tree
The spurious courage that drink supplies
Sets our baser passions free;
But the stimulant which the horseman feels
When he gallops fast and straight,
To his better nature most appeals
and charity conquers hate... etcetc
 

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Wayne
further to previous
Here are all 8 of Gordon's Fyttes , (fits? lol). The two poems below are Fytte II and III.
plus the Lay of the Last Charger. (I love that one )
Let us know what you think.
 

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OKKER AUTONOMY (call it an Easter message of peace if you prefer )

There’s a little fledgling nation, call it Oz, or “Okkerland”
While sitting at Eureka said “c’mon ! let’s make a stand!”,
Since then has made pretensions to the truth and the UN,
And so gained its autonomy on what to do and when.

Autonomous young nation, you’ll be judged in years to come,
Please “filter” all “sensation” and don’t follow causes dumb,
Don’t charge into mass lynchings, where young angels fear to tread,
There’s such a thing as “walk beside” much preferable to “lead”.

Autonomy, umBilicals are long since naval floss,
Be anything you wanna be, but YOU’re your moral boss,
Don’t follow Uncle Sam so blind – he’ll lead you up some creek,
His brightest talent talons, and that razor eagle beak.

His Peace Corps boys around the world make friends for life it seems ,
And meet old friends on islands, and they smile at long held dreams,
They shake the hands of kindred souls they taught at some bark school - ….
Don’t “stuff it up” with warlike goals, because of some blind fool.

The history of Uncle Sam as all good Texans know
Means “equal justice for the lamb went out with Alamo”
Those Mexicans who fought it had no right to be out there,
And Davey Crockett bought it, and his motives pure and fair.

Don’t follow him so readily boy, he likes to play with death,
Some “four-year king” with deadly toys – makes choir boy of Macbeth,
Unless you win some hearts and minds, you’ll never win that goal,
That makes your land a noble place, and gives your nation soul.

Be careful of your Uncle boy he preaches like a monk
He loves to taunt like Dirty Harry “Feelin lucky, punk?”
He has such simple ethics, he can make it up each day -
“Don’t do that which we do, you all, just do that which we say!”.

Be careful of your Uncle boy he’s just a little wild
His birth and youth the tantrums of a civil warring child
Where strength was proven without doubt to emanate from guns
And carpet baggers laughing at “red-badge-of-courage” sons.

He learnt the law of “might is right” and jaundiced record books
Those written by the victors, “how we beat those wimpish sooks”
He’s lost all sense of moral cause, he’s now his own worst foe
And pity help some “Mouse that Roars” at modern GI Joe.

Tis only seven score year and four, that Lincoln gave his speech (1863)
He spoke of equals, principles, the stuff that teachers teach,
But how the heck can kids grow up in these uncertain times,?
We’ve traded any moral code for blood-soaked oil-soaked dimes.

I wonder what would Lincoln think if now he saw the mess
Of how we bomb the innocent, yet innocence protest.
And pity help the child that sees through any kings new clothes
Who makes predictions terrified of ugly things he loathes.

“I think therefore I’m here, I am”?, - that’s much too strong on tact!
He much prefers “I think KERBAM” He much prefers to act,
And pity help some Mouse that Roars, his sense of humour’s gone
KERBAM to you, to hell with cause, (his Xmas list is long).

A truly moral message that will resonate for years
Is not the one the booms out of a cannon near your ears
And who recalls the word of Caesar in historic mist ?
And who prefers the gentle thoughts of Buddha or the Christ?


I really liked the English Archbishop of Canterbury's Easter message ...(something like) ..

"We might get peace , but not before Moslems stop thinking of Christians as Crusaders
and Christians stop thinking of Moslems as Terrorists"
 

PS There's only one thing I hate more than where we are going
and that is the speed with which we are going there .

PS I met US Peace Corps blokes in the islands - scuba dived with em - great ambassadors working with poor village kids - shame that their work is being undermined by "recent events".
 
The Poet

Tom Wayman

Loses his position on worksheet or page in textbook
May speak much but makes little sense
Cannot give clear verbal instructions
Does not understand what he reads
Does not understand what he hears
Cannot handle “yes-no” questions

Has great difficulty interpreting proverbs
Has difficulty recalling what he ate for breakfast, etc.
Cannot tell a story from a picture
Cannot recognize visual absurdities

Has difficulty classifying and categorizing objects
Has difficulty retaining such things as
addition and subtraction facts, or multiplication tables
May recognize a word one day and not the next


From In a Small House on the Outskirts of Heaven, 1989
Harbour Publishing (Canada)
 
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