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ASF Poetry Thread

Here's one for nude girl.

One of my ex-girlfriends, who I was with for a long time, and who I remained closed to after it was over, has been in a coma for the last month. Unfortunately, they haven't been able to bring her out, so it appears she is brain-dead.

Anyway, she was a great poet, so I thought I would post some of the stuff she wrote for me.

Cheers,
Chops.

A Day to Remember


On the 16th of December,
Is a day I’ll always remember.
This is the day we agreed on together,
I’ll remember this day always and forever.

We’ve had our share of ups and downs,
And I know there’s been times I’ve made you frown.
The first year was rough, but we’ve made it through,
The only reason why is because of the Love I have for you.

I never thought I could love someone as much as I Love you,
I’ve proven to myself and hopefully proven it to you too.
From the day I met you, you’ve had a special place in my heart,
Not a day I want to go by and us spend it apart.

All the years before this really seem quite wasted,
Especially since your love I’ve tasted.
All the Love I have for you, you’ll never completely know,
But for the last 365 days I’ve really tried to show.

You truly mean so very much to me,
You’re so incredible, I know you’ll become all you can be.
You’ve made me laugh, you’ve made me cry,
And there’s times that I Love you so much I feel I could die.

This has been one year, all I can pray for is many more,
For the rest of my life this year I will always adore.
The name of this poem is “A Day to Rememer,”
The day I refer to is the 16th of December.
 
Heres one of mine

Fetch me the handled vessel
So I may commit plasmatic consummation
Then kiss the maiden who in her country skirts
Came forth from the vineyard
Bearing grapes overflowing in baskets
That in chemical metamorphosis
Will blossom in my senses
Stumbling into dreams
 
2020hindsight said:
sad story bud. she must be young and all. commisserations.
makes you realise how short life is yes?
She must have been brain-dead to go out with me in the first place. Lol!

Jokes aside, there are so many more important things in life than money. You've just got to do all you can for the people you care about while you can. These people's happiness is priceless.
 
There's a quote somewhere, "Salt water is the cure for everything, tears sweat or the sea".

Here's a couple of French songs about sea, sailing etc. one written in 1943 by Charles Trenet, one more recent - could be applied to many "farewell" situations I guess.
The english song (Bobby Darin etc) says "We'll meet beyond the sea, and never again go sailing". No such sentiments apparently in the original French version.
 
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YgSATgDjoJA&NR
I mentioned this one a few posts back - found the song at last.

I WON'T SEND ROSES from the musical Mack and Mabel

I won't send roses, Or hold the door
I won't remember, Which dress you wore
My heart is too much in control
The lack of romance in my soul
Will turn you grey, kid , So stay away, kid

Forget my shoulder , When you're in need
Forgetting birthdays , Is guaranteed
And should I love you, you would be, The last to know
I won't send roses , And roses suit you so

My pace is frantic , My temper's cross
With words romantic, I'm at a loss
I'd be the first one to agree
That I'm preoccupied with me
And it's inbred, kid , So keep your head, kid

In me you'll find things , Like guts and nerve
But not the kind things , That you deserve
And so while there's a fighting chance, Just turn and go
I won't send roses , And roses suit you so.
 
Dear 2020'

For you as requested



They **** you up, your mum and dad.
They may not mean to, but they do.
They fill you with the faults they had
And add some extra, just for you.

PLarkin

Garpal
 
Garpal Gumnut said:
They **** you up, your mum and dad.
They may not mean to, but they do.
They fill you with the faults they had
And add some extra, just for you. ..PLarkin
top stuff m8
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BU1FuozjiAg
 
I say get over it... make some cash and move out.... That's what I'm doing... I don't play the blame game... remember this

you are the common denominator

so get your life handled... no, whinging just do it
 
Dear Insider,

There is no need to shout.

a poem by Philip Larkin , just for you

Money

Quarterly, is it, money reproaches me:
'Why do you let me lie here wastefully?
I am all you never had of goods and sex.
You could get them still by writing a few cheques.'

So I look at others, what they do with theirs:
They certainly don't keep it upstairs.
By now they've a second house and car and wife:
Clearly money has something to do with life

- In fact, they've a lot in common, if you enquire:
You can't put off being young until you retire,
And however you bank your screw, the money you save
Won't in the end buy you more than a shave.

I listen to money singing. It's like looking down
From long French windows at a provincial town,
The slums, the canal, the churches ornate and mad
In the evening sun. It is intensely sad.

-- Philip Larkin

A couple of notes: "bank your screw" refers to putting your wages in the
bank; this is British slang and no longer current. And the "shave"
referred to is the shave you get from the mortician when you are dead,
to make you look good in the coffin.

Garpal
 
lol, another similar (I forget the author of this rhyming quote - call it a short poem i guess):-
"money talks", i hear some cry ...
I heard it once it said "goodbye"
 
maybe others heard a talk about Furphy on Macca this morning.
I only heard the quote about his motto "until the good was better and until the better best", hence the following.

THE JOHN FURPHY MOTTO
when the diggers craved discussion, when their brave nerve needed rest
they invented boast and blushin’, cos the cure for fear was jest
and amongst the falling mortar, they were generals (second guessed)
and they’d gather at the watercart, and come back de- possessed.
- and the rumours used to give their lives some zest.

these old tanks were made by Furphy, something like the local well
they were manufactured perfect, - gave the old man pride to sell, -
and the lads would find the pathways to oases in the dell
and they’d walk towards the laughter, and the odd exploding shell –
- and their yarns were even heard by mates who fell.

with the motto on the nametag re-emblazened in their chest
(for these tanks inspired some famous tales, as sun sunk in the west)
their throats would leave the wetter, with their yarns all self-confessed-
“until the good was better and until the better best”
- (while a few came home by letter, , to a man , they came home blessed.)
 
The following poem is English translation and would probably be known to many Philipinos. It was written by Jose Rizal, the first Asian leader to propose non-violent protest against (Spanish) colonialism - ahead of Ghandi - using his writing to awake the sense of freedom in Philipinos.

It was written the night before he was executed by the Spanish (on trumped up charges), aged 35 yrs. (written in Spanish - this is translation)
http://www.ac.wwu.edu/~fasawwu/resources/rizal/my-last-farewell/
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http://www.univie.ac.at/Voelkerkunde/apsis/aufi/jorizal.htm
http://www.univie.ac.at/Voelkerkunde/apsis/aufi/rizal/rzpoem4.htm
he spent much of his adult life in Spain - studied extensively in medicine, poetry, sculpture, engineering, you name it .
Philippinos worship this guy
mountains of info here if anyone is interested in reading further:-
http://www.joserizal.ph/in01.html
 
In games of war that pollies play, with others as their pawns
Their questionable "calls to arms" that land us all in thorns,
Again some rental hardly missed, is paid as war day dawns
And "others" make up missing lists, "Another" mother mourns
- from pawn to polished granite, amid well kept tombstone lawns.

Such sadly long term rental and such sadly short term lives
And such questionable motives, as some Pollies life revives.

I wrote this poem leaning against a gum in Kings Park Perth, (dedicated to the memory of a soldier who didn't return) - and looking on a memorial to West Australians who didn't return - one of whom I had given a course of instruction, (and knew well), and two who I buried Please don't question my patriotic credentials.
 
The Money Tree

I'd LIKE a bludy money tree – today! before I’m broke!
a thirty footer fir maybe , or eighty metre oak
or even hek a Christmas pine all laden with its fruit
as long as all the fruit was mine, and all the fruit was loot.

I'd LIKE those 50 dollar leaves, all green and dewdrop laden
or even after autumn thieves leave 20’s red and fadin’
I’d even live with bluey 10’s , or purple fives in droves-
…………
But knowing how the real world wends,
I’ll be happy with some loaves
 
An example of Churchill "Picking the right word"...
(ps maybe skip this unless you are a Churchill fan - or need your positive thinking geed-up lol)
http://www.winstonchurchill.org/i4a/pages/index.cfm?pageid=423
 
I LOVE THE BUSH.
I love the bush - the way the trees stretch up towards an endless sky
like placards pushing some green freeze – just leave them there to stately die
I doubt that God in Heaven cares if one mere mortal questions why
but maybe sixteen million dare, to fight the greenhouse, fight the dry.

Those gently carbon trading leaves just sucking in and smiling back
those stately limbs that nature weaves where birds and blossoms interact
Like nails into the earth those trunks, that stake their claim for future life
and praps rebirth, like wooden monks, ...
or praps the coffin nails of strife.


(A bloke down the road wants me to plant a coupla trees - to help him with a development application lol - council requirement that he gets 100 trees planted - I said sure !! - then took the dog for a walk in the bush, and got to thinking about trees.
 
Insider, I believe we were talking about "allegorical stories" on another thread . (assuming you can be bothered with this boring stuff, and reading non-trading threads

Here's a quote from that wikipedia site about allegory vs metaphor etc, about Tolkien's opinion of allegory (but I'm damned if I agree with him) :-
For instance, I personally really like Adam Lindsay Gordon's poem as below:-
PS like my son might say - "I metaphor a drink dad, just a drink, that's all - and then the fog closed in, and ..!"
 
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